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R&P = 14
Production = 30
Evaluation = 5

Total = 49 E

Targets:
Evaluation activities need to be 7 separate posts, clearly titled 'evaluation activity 1' etc
Screen shots are needed to show how you have conformed to/subverted the conventions of your chosen genre's typical opening 2 minutes
Much more detail needed. Some of the activities have not been completed.
Audience profiling post - explain how you intend to appeal to this target audience in your opening 2 minutes.
Scripting is needed.