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Research and planning: Level 3 14/20
Proficient work on storyboarding
Proficient research into similar products and a potential target audience
Proficient organisation of actors, costumes and locations
Good level of care in the presentation of the research and planning

To progress to level 4, make sure you have explained how your research impacted your decisions (for example in your audience profile posts, explain how you intend to address the potential target audience in your opening 2 minutes)
More work needed on scripting.

Production: Level 2 30/60
There is evidence of a basic level of ability in the creative use of the following:
Using sound with images and editing appropriately for the task set.
Shooting material appropriate to the task set, including using a variety of shot types and attention to mise-en-scene
Using editing so that meaning is apparent to the viewer

There is a proficient level of ability in using titles appropriately for the target audience and task.

To progress, consider using a wider range of shot types and give clear indications as to the genre through dialogue/mise-en-scene.